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section 214 - NOUF AL_THEBAN
the jealous Brother

the miners wife was shecked suddenly the king gave the miner and has wife a gift a house and a small farmgold rings the miner was vary happy the poor miner told her brother abut the story her brother vary jealous his brother he sea you are so luaky
but the brother hate to see the house and farm and he didt have any thing eventually the brother kill the miner and has waif
to take the houes for him to live in houes alone
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Hi Noof, you tried your best to write a paragraph. Make sure you capitalize the word when you start your sentence. Your spelling also needs an improvement. Maybe, you browse the dictionary once in a while to be familiar with the words. Some mispelled words are: lucky, wife, did, house. There are missing words which I need to personally discuss with you.

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